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        Chapter 1: Pilaf's Wish! What's with You, Goku?


        * * *

        Morning hours. The day after the party described in Chapter Zero. Son Goten and Trunks exit the Gravity Chamber outside.

        GOTEN
        cheerful
        Once again, thanks for the training!

        TRUNKS
        embarrassed
        No problem. You're doing pretty well...

        GOTEN
        Oh, you don't have to pretend... I've really let myself go! In a full-on fight, I wouldn't stand a chance against you.

        TRUNKS
        awkward, unsure of what to say — then suddenly notices something in the sky
        Hey, Goten! Isn't that your dad and Uub?

        GOTEN
        shocked
        W-What? It is him! But he said he'd stay for at least a week... Mom won't be happy.

        TRUNKS
        soberly, with calmness
        Maybe they're not flying far.

        GOTEN
        We'd have to follow them to find out.

        TRUNKS
        If you insist...!
        takes off into the air

        GOTEN
        startled
        W-Wait! You misunderstood me...! That wasn't a suggestion!

        TRUNKS
        smiles
        Still, I think it's a pretty good idea! They surely won't mind if we follow them.  

        GOTEN
        I guess you're right... Alright, let's go after them.  

        After waiting a moment longer, Goten and Trunks fly after Goku and Uub.

        * * *

        Son Goku and his apprentice land on the Lookout, where Dende, Mister Popo, and Piccolo are waiting for them.

        GOKU
        merrily
        Hi everyone! How are y’all doin’?

        PICCOLO
        smiles to himself
        Can't complain, Son. Glad you could make it.

        Adult Dende
        DENDE
        exulted
        Goku! Uub! Good to see you!

        GOKU
        Good to see ya too, Dende!
        after a brief pause
        I got a little question for ya...

        DENDE
        ready to answer
        What is it?

        GOKU
        After we sort them things out with Piccolo, can we use the Hyperbolic Time Chamber?

        DENDE
        placidly
        Sure thing! Just be careful — I know you guys are mighty strong, but try not to wreck the Chamber.  

        GOKU
        You betcha, Dende!

        DENDE
        with a smile
        Mister Popo will be watching over you.

        POPO
        nervously swallows

        PICCOLO
        impatient
        Is everything settled? Come on, let's get going. The sooner I show you my work, the sooner you can start training...

        Goku, Piccolo, and Uub move to another location.

        * * *

        Here is the Pilaf Gang, Goku's childhood adversaries, consisting of Emperor Pilaf himself, Mai, and Shu. They are climbing, trying to get to the Lookout, in grotesquely-looking mechs, which gradually begin to smoke — the prolonged climb is not doing them any favor.

        PILAF
        enraged
        Argh! Blast it all! We still have quite a ways to go, and these scraps are overheating already!

        MAI
        embarrassed
        Relax, Great Pilaf. They've been unused for quite a while... They'll surely hold out till the end! Besides, back in the day, fuming like this was normal...

        PILAF
        with melancholy in his voice
        I hope you're right! But who am I kidding... Most likely, the Dragon Balls will slip through my fingers at the very last moment...

        SHU
        trying to be optimistic
        Have more faith in yourself, Lord Pilaf! There's no reason why something like this should happen to us! No one knows we're sneaking onto the Look-...

        Suddenly, Goten and Trunks, following Goku and Uub’s tracks, fly past the Pilaf Gang.

        PILAF
        terrified
        AAAAAH! We've been spotted, the whole plan is for nothing!
        releases the levers of his Mech, causing it to lose balance

        Pilaf's Mech teeters dangerously close to falling off the tower. The Emperor notices it and begins to wave his arms in panic.

        PILAF
        panicking
        Oh noooo! Shu, save me! Don't let the Great Emperor perish!

        SHU
        with concern
        I rush to your aid, my Lord!
        Shu's Mech releases a long tentacle-like arm, which catches Pilaf's Mech just in time

        PILAF
        with gratitude
        Phew...! Thank you, Shu!
        suddenly turns gloomy
        Maybe it would have been better for me to die after all, seeing as my plan has once again  turned into ruins...!

        MAI
        rolls her eyes, then addresses Pilaf respectfully
        There's no certainty that those two saw us. And even if they did, how would they know our intentions?

        PILAF
        regains composure and pride in his voice
        Yes, Mai, of course! I, Pilaf, will make my wish today using the Dragon Balls! Let's go!

        Pilaf's Mech continues climbing ahead. Shu and Mai sigh simultaneously and follow its lead.

        * * *

        Meanwhile, Piccolo, Goku, and Uub stand behind the Hyperbolic Time Chamber. On the ground lies something covered by the piece of cloth.

        PICCOLO
        with satisfaction
        Here they are!
        tosses the fabric aside, revealing the complete set of Black Star Dragon Balls

        GOKU
        widens his eyes and, scratching his head, says
        Umm... Piccolo?

        PICCOLO
        perplexed
        What?

        GOKU
        disappointed
        They look just like regular Dragon Balls. Only they have different stars.

        PICCOLO
        exasperated
        Of course they do! What did you expect?!

        GOKU
        hesitantly
        I dunno, that they'd be big, like Namekian Dragon Balls... or... or r-really small...?

        PICCOLO
        sighs
        Perhaps their looks is disappointing, but their power surely exceeds anything we've dealt with so far...

        GOKU
        Already wished for somethin’?

        PICCOLO
        with an ambiguous grimace
        No... That time will come.

        GOKU
        scratching his head
        So how do ya know how strong they are?

        Adult Uub
        UUB
        shyly
        Master Goku, could we now head to the Time Chamber?  

        GOKU
        Easy there, Uub! You ain't no Saiyan, but trainin's callin' ya more than me!
        laughs

        PICCOLO
        emphasizing
        Son, getting back to the point...
        continues in a normal tone
        I created these Dragon Balls, so I know how much power I put into them. Besides, I drew upon both my power and Kami's, with whom I'm unified, much like many years ago he and my father were. So they must be capable of way more than the Orbs currently linked to Dende.

        GOKU
        blithely
        That's good, Piccolo! We'll sure need another set o' them Dragon Balls someday... But now, sorry, I'm off to the Hyperbolic Time Chamber.
        to Uub
        Let's go!

        Goku and Uub depart.

        PICCOLO
        sighs again
        Thought I'd be more appreciated... Ugh...!

        Piccolo covers the Dragon Balls with a cloth and then leaves as well.
        After a moment, at the same spot, the Pilaf Gang's Mechs are seen climbing up to the top of the Lookout.

        SHU
        struggling to push Pilaf's Mech
        Easy there, Pilaf...
        with effort
        Just a little... bit!

        Pilaf is the first to reach the top, followed by Shu, and then Mai.

        PILAF
        after spreading his arms wide and letting out a sinister chuckle
        Behold, it is I! Pilaf the Conqueror! On this day, my dreams shall be fulfilled!

        MAI
        placing her index finger to her lips
        Pilaf, I suggest you speak a bit quieter, or we'll really get caught.

        PILAF
        suddenly starts whispering
        Yes, yes... That's exactly what I'm ordering you to do…!

        Pilaf cautiously approaches the rear wall of the Hyperbolic Time Chamber, where the Black Star Dragon Balls lie covered with a cloth.

        PILAF
        From the shapes I can discern under this cover, I deduce the following...
        turns to his Gang with a silly but earnest smile
        ...these are my Dragon Balls!

        MAI AND SHU
        show signs of genuine joy

        PILAF
        with tears in his eyes, looks up at the sky, spreads his arms, and says
        Behold, the day has come! The day when Great Pilaf will fulfill his lifelong dream!
        throws aside the cloth and rubs his hands together
        Yes, yes, yes, yes...!
        raises his arms up
        This is it! Come forth, Divine Dragon!

        Nothing happens. Mai and Shu are shocked.

        PILAF
        How come?

        Suddenly, the Black Star Dragon Balls begin to emit steam, and then they start to spark.

        SHU
        worried
        P-Pilaf... These might not be ordinary Dragon Balls...

        PILAF
        examines the Orbs and declares
        Indeed! Their stars are... black!

        The Dragon Balls begin sparking more intensely, after which a blinding pillar of light bursts forth from them.

        PILAF
        taken aback loses his balance and falls
        Ah!

        MAI AND SHU
        shielding their eyes
        AAAAAAH!

        At the same time, Uub and Goku were about to enter the Hyperbolic Time Chamber when, unexpectedly, they were halted by the emergence of unusually powerful energy signature.

        GOKU
        gets serious
        Uub, stay put.
        teleports using Instant Transmission

        Goku appears near Pilaf and, with his very own eyes, sees an enormous dragon, even larger than the Shenron he knows, appearing in the sky. This dragon is red with accents of yellow and pink.

        PILAF
        with unspeakable joy
        Divine Dragon!

        RED SHENRON
        in a booming, deep voice
        Greetings, those gathered! I have come to grant my first wish...!

        PILAF, MAI AND SHU
        euphorically
        YEEEEEEES!

        GOKU
        firmly
        Hey, you guys! Where’d y’all come from?! How’d ya find out about these Dragon Balls?!

        PILAF
        terrified runs to Mai and Shu
        Ah! It's...

        PILAF, MAI AND SHU
        ...Son Goku!

        GOKU
        surprised
        Y'all know me?

        SHU
        Of course, you're Son Goku! Our paths crossed when you were just a little bo-...

        PILAF
        covers Shu's mouth
        Silence, you fool!

        Piccolo, Uub, Popo, and Dende arrive. Same goes for Goten and Trunks who too land at the spot.

        UUB
        to Goku
        Master, is everything alright?

        GOTEN
        confused
        What’s going on here...?

        GOKU
        turns to the newcomers
        Don’t worry, everythin’s under control...
        turns back to Pilaf Gang
        Y’all better leave. Ya shouldn’t be here...

        PILAF
        hysterically
        NO! You’re not taking my triumph! Mai, fire!

        MAI
        pulls out a remote and presses a button, causing the reactivation of mechs, which then fire rockets at Goku.

        To the amazement of the onlookers, Goku calmly adopts a fighting stance, then, without getting injured, destroys most of the rockets with his bare hands, and some of them shoots down with a few Ki Blasts.

        PILAF
        with helplessness in his voice
        Dang it... It’s been so many years since we last met. You’ve become a great warrior...
        with spite
        I wish you were a kid again, like back then! You wouldn’t have thwarted my plans...

        PICCOLO
        vehemently, to Pilaf
        No, you fool!

        RED SHENRON
        calmly
        Your wish shall be granted…!

        PILAF, MAI AND SHU
        shocked
        WHAAAAAT?!

        GOKU
        astounded
        Say what...?

        The eyes of the Red Dragon emit a blue glow, and a strange aura envelops Goku. His body rapidly de-ages, and his clothing shrinks to match his child-sized form. Everyone present watches in horror.

        UUB
        M-Master?

        GOKU
        in genuine astonishment
        Is it just me, or did everythin’ just got bigger?

        PILAF
        desperately
        Noooo! My wish!

        RED SHENRON
        grimly
        My duty has been fulfilled, but before I depart, I must tell you something....

        Everyone looks at the Dragon in fear, awaiting his words.

        RED SHENRON
        I am the Ultimate. My first wish may also be the last...

        PICCOLO
        sweat forms on his forehead, thinks
        No, it can't be... Did I do something wrong?!

        ULTIMATE SHENRON
        with great dignity
        My power comes from both a Warrior-type Namekian and a Healer-type, making it immense. There are but few wishes I cannot grant, yet it is not without consequences... The Earth cannot contain my power, so the Dragon Balls will disperse throughout the local planetary system...

        TRUNKS
        in disbelief
        You mean... into... s-space?!

        ULTIMATE SHENRON
        in a firm tone
        The Earth, as my birthplace, however, has to carry another burden! If all seven Black Star Dragon Balls are not gathered here within one month, then...

        PICCOLO
        in horror
        No, no, no, no!

        ULTIMATE SHENRON
        with some trouble
        ...it will face annihilation. Remember my words, and until we meet again. Hopefully...
        starts disappearing

        PICCOLO
        No, you stay! I command you, as your creator!

        The dragon disappears, and the Black Star Dragon Balls soar into the sky, each flying into the unknown in a different direction.

        SHU
        bewildered, widens his eyes
        Can someone explain what just happened...?!

        PICCOLO
        furious
        Argh! Get out of my sight!
        blasts Pilaf Gang off the Lookout with a gust of wind caused by Ki Energy

        PILAF, MAI AND SHU
        AAAAAAAH!
        as they fall, Mai pulls a cord on her jacket, turning it into a parachute, which allows both her and Shu and Pilaf, who are clinging to her legs, to survive the fall

        PILAF
        crying
        Again! Why again?!

        MAI
        sighs
        What would you guys do without me...?

        Meanwhile, on the Lookout.

        PICCOLO
        in shock
        How could this have happened?!

        DENDE
        faints and slumps into the arms of a terrified Mr. Popo

        GOKU
        looks around at the gathered bunch with a dumbfounded look on his face, then says to Uub
        Why’s everyone so scared?

        TRUNKS
        sits in astonishment
        And here I thought I'd seen everything...

        GOTEN
        genuinely perplexed
        T-Trunks? Do you know... why my dad turned into a little version of me?

        * * *

        The cover of Chapter 1: Son Goku gets rejuvenated by the Ultimate Shenron

        * * *
        Highly recommended!
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